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Forever Is A Promise by ~matchbookromance1344:iconmatchbookromance1344:

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My sister says she'll always hate me
And she hopes that I should die
But forever is a promise
And she can't afford to lie

My mother says she'll never accept me
She thinks I'm weak when I cry
But forever is a promise
And she can't afford to lie

My father swore he'd always protect me
But he's never at my side
Because forever is a promise
And he can't afford to lie

My friends thought they'd always care
They told me it'd always be fine
But forever is a promise
And they can't afford to lie

You tell me that you'll always love me
That you'll always make it right
But forever is a promise
And I can't afford your lie
©2008-2009 ~matchbookromance1344
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~twighlightmoon:icontwighlightmoon: May 13, 2008, 6:43:21 AM
:clap: *clap* wow this is great. I like the repetitive rythem and I can connect with the story. Good job.

--
"Oh dear God, I don't feel alive! When your cut short of misery, will you pray it be the end? Give a look surprised wide-eyed to me!"

~Coheed and Cambria, Delirium Trigger
~EmmEmperor:iconEmmEmperor: May 13, 2008, 6:48:28 AM
I really like this one. I like it's way of discribe the importens of trust and honesty (that's how I think of it, did you have another "meaning" with this text?). I know how it is to be betrayde, and it is not funny and it's hard to get over it, but it made me stronger and opened my eyes and gave me a new perspective on things in life. I can see my experiences in this text, and I can also see the fact that I lies aren't worth listening to or even bother to deal with (if it's not nessecery).
wonderful poem!
:+fav:

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Life is precious because we only live it once and thereby we are all originals.
~matchbookromance1344:iconmatchbookromance1344: May 13, 2008, 8:17:06 AM
I'm actually kind of sorry you're able to relate to it, :3
But thanks so much for the comment and fave.

I really appreciate it.
I'm about to go to school, but I'd like to read/view some of your stuff when I get home.

--
"Nobody move! I dropped my brain."

*gunshot* "That's my peanut."

"I wash my hands of this weirdness."

"Here, you can throw my hat if you'd like."
"Hooray!" *throws hat*
"Now go get it."

"Ooh, a peanut."

"No, no. Once is enough."
~matchbookromance1344:iconmatchbookromance1344: May 13, 2008, 8:18:50 AM
Thank you for the comment and :+fav:.
And yeah, life can throw some real crap your way.

I'm glad you were able to get over it, though.
♥

I'd like to check out your gallery after I get home from school.

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"Nobody move! I dropped my brain."

*gunshot* "That's my peanut."

"I wash my hands of this weirdness."

"Here, you can throw my hat if you'd like."
"Hooray!" *throws hat*
"Now go get it."

"Ooh, a peanut."

"No, no. Once is enough."
~EmmEmperor:iconEmmEmperor: May 13, 2008, 8:29:30 AM
thank you for caring ^^

oh, really? thanks! you know where to find it ^^

--
Life is precious because we only live it once and thereby we are all originals.
~Rawr-Kathryn:iconRawr-Kathryn: May 13, 2008, 1:18:10 PM
I love your peoms. Especaily this one. I can connect to the last part...
The wording is really great :)

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Paint a picture.
Your lips are the brush,
Mine are the canvas.
Let's make it a masterpiece<3
~matchbookromance1344:iconmatchbookromance1344: May 13, 2008, 2:02:23 PM
Thank youuuuu ;___;

--
"Nobody move! I dropped my brain."

*gunshot* "That's my peanut."

"I wash my hands of this weirdness."

"Here, you can throw my hat if you'd like."
"Hooray!" *throws hat*
"Now go get it."

"Ooh, a peanut."

"No, no. Once is enough."
~ai-08:iconai-08: May 13, 2008, 3:19:48 PM
i love this poem... but i'm sad that you wrote it. i hate that families 9who are supposed to be THERE FOR YOU) fucking SUCK.
>.<

*big hug*
i know i'm... well you know XD but i love you.

--
mmmleeches :3
~twighlightmoon:icontwighlightmoon: May 13, 2008, 4:02:26 PM
Okey-dokey thanks much. (I relate to the emotion not the situation but thanks for the concern)

--
"Oh dear God, I don't feel alive! When your cut short of misery, will you pray it be the end? Give a look surprised wide-eyed to me!"

~Coheed and Cambria, Delirium Trigger
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